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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


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In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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I don't buy presents for my coworkers and friends. Instead I write poetry to them.

I started combining their names with whatever words rhyme with it, sometimes with very funny results. However, Id like what I write to sound more elegant and intimate.

I also tried combining their physical features with whatever rhymes with nose, arm, eye... Sometimes results are also funny.

If it helps, most of my coworkers are women, all of them are strictly platonic friends. Id also write a poem to a male coworker.

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[–] [email protected] 1 points 10 months ago* (last edited 10 months ago)

Get a thesaurus

I usually think it out in my head and jot it down. Refine it with different words

Write the male coworkers poem about the nfl lol

[–] [email protected] 1 points 10 months ago

Read a lot of poets, and find one you like. Try to imitate their style, the way they use language. It won't be good at first, but that's normal, and it'll help you find your own way of writing quickly. From there, it just takes practice.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 10 months ago

Write a short note or letter to said loved one, then go through it with a highlighter picking key words and phrases you’d like to stitch into your poem - this gives an air of intimacy and elegance to your work.

Spend time polishing your piece. Sometimes for me that means writing it three different ways and see what bits you like.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 10 months ago* (last edited 10 months ago)

[OC] Vestmoria:

Chest like Armour

Arms like Amor

Daddy, god of war

Arrows soar

Only targets, nothing more