MC: GOO Bladelock 6/Paladin 6 - You need a frontliner and that comp noticeably doesn't have one.
Shadowheart: Light or Tempest Cleric 11/Druid 1 - Druid lvl adds a ton of spells, Shillelagh, and only delays progression by one lvl. Polymorph the defining spell that made Trickery domain was pretty severely nerfed in game so you will want to change her subclass.
Gale: Conjuration Wizard 12 - Wizards are great and Benign Transportation is super handy.
Astarion: Thief Rogue 3/Swords Bard 7 - Sharpshooter Duel-wield Hand-crossbows. It's a Machinegun. Plus you end up with a ton skills and Expertise.