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[โ€“] [email protected] 3 points 1 year ago (1 children)

As a writer and teacher, I was wracking my brains trying to think what item would be most desirable. You've summed it up perfectly, I think. I'd maybe throw on some kind of fountain pen, like a Twsbi Eco or Kaweco Sport.

[โ€“] [email protected] 0 points 1 year ago (1 children)

@CaptainMinnette I mean that writing the decisive action in a scene is not a problem-- working out how that action concludes is what I'm struggling with. Another way to put it is that my scenes are beginning or middle heavy, but don't have a satisfying end that transitions to the next.

 

I'm reviewing my manuscript and noticing that my scenes tend to trail off towards the end. This has been a long, arduous project and moving from scene to scene where the enthusiasm appeared was one way to keep on track with targets. Now I need to knit everything together into a cohesive whole. What tips to people have for rounding off scenes? How can I best make sure there is continuity between scenes/chapters/segments?