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Ok, 11 chapters in and this is funny but in a strange kinda deranged way, for quality I'm giving it a solid D
Also, most problems could be solved by giving her a name, it's clear to him that other people see her as a actual person and not a literal dick. It's hard to read this when they are inserting all these plot holes
I finished it, while this is arguably the worst thing I ever read, every line is so fucking raw that I have to give it a pass. The balls twist is unexpected tho. Don't expect me to read any more chapters because I won't.