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Creative! I agree that the ramen one is the best of the three, though the one with the snow and cream bun (?) is also fairly good. The person in that one with their face cut off adds a mysterious vibe, though I don't know if that's what you were going for.
The third one, with the beer, idk exactly what happened but the human fingers look weird, like you messed with the contrast or HSL and something went a bit funny. It's a nice shot otherwise, though.
Thanks, the finger looks a bit weird indeed, now that you have mentioned it. Should be able to fix that though. They are all basically selfies and I didn't really feel like showing my face hence they are all cut off.
The cream bun is Swedish semla, a cardamom bun filled with almond paste and cream they are delicious!